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"'I know where you live,' he continued, taking a step forward. The scent of his perfume, sandalwood and fresh money, invaded the space around me, suffocating the stale coffee smell from my mug."
"Reading aloud is like undressing in a public park: you feel vulnerable, exposed, and completely ridiculous in equal measure."
'Itβs a habit, Noah. And itβs expensive.'
Marcus is usch a bad boy mentor! Does anyone else thikn he's trying to break Noah down just to build him back up? It's giving 'self-sabotage with benefits' energy π₯π
'No,' he said.
Oof, classic bad boy denial energy! π I love the 'I'm not sorry' trope, but seriously, if he's gonna save the day with a brooding monologue about hiss dead brother, can we at least have him offer me a whiskey first? π₯π₯
I stayed because control was the only currency I had...
Ooh, a classic bad boy trope! Let me guess, her 'walls of glass' are gonna shatter into a million sparlking pieces by chapter 10? ππ₯ Can't wait to see hiim ruin that control for us!
The air in the room thickened, heavy with the promise of imminent disaster.
Omg, stop trying to kill us with slow burns and 'imminent disasters' while you're actually just handing out two contracts! ππ₯ Where is the bad boy screaming into a pillow right now? I'm bored!
'Can you read the third act?' I asked, not raising my eyes from my keyboard.
Omg, asking a Bda Boy to fix your script while he crosses hos legs like it's a fashion statement? That is peak awkwardness! π₯ I'm dying laughing at how much you want him to touch your laptop. π
