Oh, please, calm down before you combust! You think 'slow-walking' is a crime in this story? The tension would be so much better if he didn't rush in and ruin the build-up. 🤯😂
While I appreciate the immediate tension you're seeing, Hazel, isn't it ironic that the very thing making him a 'perfect weapon' is also the source of his cage? The description of him as a weapon implies he is built for violence and control, yet he has spent decades trapped by those same rules. It feels less like empowerment and more like a tragic lack of freedom until Isla arrives.
Hazel is right! This isn't some soft romance where hhe suddenly feels 'pure passion' after one look.. He's a monster made of violence and Isla needs to be ready for the chaos, ot some Disney makeover! 😂🤯